Saturday, May 22, 2010

SeReNaDe sPiRiT - 77 FiCtIoN



All you funny people, I bring to you Neha (http://www.nehasilam.com/)... yes Nehatrix and Nehasilam... she is the one! I always think of her as a Blog factory as she keeps sending in new blogposts at regular intervals, and God knows how many more this Mumbai marathon can write..., wish her my best! This is the first guest post in my blog ..Thanks Neha :D ,Enjoy fellas!


"She had always heard about Ghosts staying in Serenade Mansion, but her heart believed Alex more than anybody else. After all, it belonged to Alex, whom she was to marry next month on 14th February, 1995.


On their wedding night, Lisa stepped in Serenade with Alex for the first time. The mansion was abnormally quiet and dark. Slightly scared, she looked at Alex. But all she could see was a portrait that said:


Alex Francis (1965-1990) "

32 comments:

Shilpa said...

Awesome!

Sameera said...

Spooky! Nice! =)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

gr8! and spooky too!
Neha nailed this one... I don't think you've done short fictions before right?

Chatterbox said...

Creepy but nice :)
Good one Neha!!

Nethra said...

Hehe! I was trying to visualize what if that girl was you. You would have ran out of there or fainted, right? lol! :D

Anuradha Khanna Pentapalli said...

ooops! short n scary ;)

Neha said...

@ Hary, thank you for the wonderful intro..it was an honour to write for your blog :)

@ Shilpa, thanks :)

@ Sameera, thank you =)

@ Saurabh, I had written one funny 55er..that's that..I don't write fiction much :)

@ CB, thank you :)

@ Nethra, lol..I would have died of an attack :P

@ Anuradha, thanks for visiting here.. :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

OMG that was really a creative one..!1 i love it!

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

it is creepily ossum!!!

Insignia said...

Chill in my spines. Awesome Neha!

kavita said...

Brilliant....signature of Neha !!

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

wow!
nice! =))

Neha said...

kinda spooky!
Never read scary 55 fiction

nice work!

:)

blunt edges said...

yoohoo...great! :D

Bikramjit Singh Mann said...

Ah well you said it all in your introduction of the girl..

and neha Spooky that was .. Excellent :)

Thousif Raza said...

hey man cooool... i liked it.... :)


and hary you have a surprise on my blog :)



take care and keep writing..........

Neha said...

@ Ayu, I love your comment..thank you :)

@ Siddie, thanks :)

@ Insignia, now that's an achievement for me..thank you!! :)))

@ Kavita, hugs :))

@ Chocolate lover, thank you..I love your name :))

Readers Dais said...

Hi! neha,
so ur round the blog:)
fiction does give a fix for a while :)

Neha said...

@ Neha, thanks..never read a spooky short fiction? oh nice..so this is one of a kind for one of a kind blog right? :D

@ Blunt Edges, thanks :)

@ Bikram, double thank you :)

@ Tausif, thanks.. I hope the take care is for me :P

Neha said...

@ RD, good to see you here..round the blog - that's a nice line :))

kanagu said...

really nice and thrilling :) :)

sm said...

one more time creative
mumbai marathon

Raji U said...

Creepy one.. Horrible.. too bad for LISA

rohini said...

That was really nicelly made up plot...Nice work Neha...

Shilpa Garg said...

Oooh! Damn scary!!
Good one, Neha!! :)

gayathri-vishwanathan said...

nice neha :)

bhooooooooooooooooooottttttttt

Guria said...

Why is everyone so paranoid?
She married Alex Francis II! Simple!!

Praseela Nair said...

Wow ! THIGIL PADAM effect! good one!

Vintage Obsession said...

Spooky indeed :)

Neha said...

@ Kanagu, thank you..:)

@ sm, thank you very much :)

@ Raji, just a fiction dear..:)

@ Rohini, thanks :)

@ Shilpa, thanks for visiting and commenting buddy :)

@ Gayathri, bhaaaaaagoooooooo :D

@ Guria, lol..you know na ;)

@ Praseela, can you translate THIGIL PADAM please? :)

@ VO, thank you :)

Urvashi said...

ooooooooooo.....tht ws gr8..!! :)

Amity said...

That portrait...my hubby's namesake!

I could smile, because they have the same name...:)