My attempt on 55 fiction continues, wonder if I fail or just a cheeky pass as in my semesters, yet here you go fellas...
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Afternoon it was, My God!
The longer he controlled himself, the more he suffered
He sweated profusely as he felt a pit down his stomach
It was no Do or Die, only Die
So finally, he eased himself for a better collapse
The eerie silence @ work haunting him
"Drrrrrrrr Burrrrrrrr" , out came the Fart !
The longer he controlled himself, the more he suffered
He sweated profusely as he felt a pit down his stomach
It was no Do or Die, only Die
So finally, he eased himself for a better collapse
The eerie silence @ work haunting him
"Drrrrrrrr Burrrrrrrr" , out came the Fart !
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Based on a true fictional incident, as and when related to me by one of my friend Sai ( Am yet to write an post on this comedian)... I pity his colleagues.
Based on a true fictional incident, as and when related to me by one of my friend Sai ( Am yet to write an post on this comedian)... I pity his colleagues.
27 comments:
Hahahahaha,.....nice...But the title should be changed to
55-Real :-)
end part of story is
interesting
good narration
Hahaha! Cant wait to be introduced to this character.
Ha ha ha ha :) Pretty understandable. ;) Pity the air-conditioned IT environment, anyone does all suffer ;)
ewww. i think this time u definitely failed!
eeeeeewwwwwwwwww!!!!
try enos...
HAJMOLA lo bhai.. jaldi se .. nahin to More 55 fictions on Way for sure ha ha ha ha haha
hahahahhahaha........
:) :) : )
lol ... this is Joke 55f :P
i guessed ur fiction right :)
is this a real incident ;)
you reminded me of the one and only 55er I have written:
THE WIND POWER
The wind touched her soul with the sweet fragrance of flowers around them in the park.
“Oh he is so irresistible in black; and nobody is around us. The time is perfect, so is the weather” she thought.
She leaned forward to kiss him, their lips met, and his arse whistled.
haha...gr8 one.. :)
But "a true fictional incident" dint get tht...!!!!
he he he :)
Nice one. Unexcpected ending.
really unexpectable..:P nice 55 fiction
Lolzz...fartable post ;p
Ha...ha happens
OH MAI GAWWWWWWWWWWD!
Or then...hey bhagwaan!:-)
Lolssssssss
Great writing! Come check my blog out :)
http://youdidwhaaat.blogspot.com/
:)
Not so goood this time :)
ha ha nice one man :)... and you have a surprise on my blog... come and look into it ok... :))
take car and keep writing........
wish sai reads this ;)
he he.. sai anna gonna kill ya ;) ;)
i can't forgive myself...i am always late:)
anyways...you made me smile here and i suddenly recall one of my students in high school when i was teaching way back so long na...:)
they were having exams and i scolded him why he was so restless, i told him to stay put on his chair, then suddenly, he farted sooooooo loud!
got me? of course u didn't laugh!
stopping by to say hello to you.long time..... enjoyed my vacation well.
jeeeez!!!!!!!
LOL!!! :P
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