Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Do Or DiE...55 FiCtIoN




My attempt on 55 fiction continues, wonder if I fail or just a cheeky pass as in my semesters, yet here you go fellas...
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Afternoon it was, My God!

The longer he controlled himself, the more he suffered

He sweated profusely as he felt a pit down his stomach

It was no Do or Die, only Die

So finally, he eased himself for a better collapse

The eerie silence @ work haunting him

"Drrrrrrrr Burrrrrrrr" , out came the Fart !

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Based on a true fictional incident, as and when related to me by one of my friend Sai ( Am yet to write an post on this comedian)... I pity his colleagues.

27 comments:

rohini said...

Hahahahaha,.....nice...But the title should be changed to
55-Real :-)

sm said...

end part of story is
interesting
good narration

Harini said...

Hahaha! Cant wait to be introduced to this character.

Nithya said...

Ha ha ha ha :) Pretty understandable. ;) Pity the air-conditioned IT environment, anyone does all suffer ;)

Raj said...

ewww. i think this time u definitely failed!

Insignia said...

eeeeeewwwwwwwwww!!!!

gayathri-vishwanathan said...

try enos...

Bikramjit said...

HAJMOLA lo bhai.. jaldi se .. nahin to More 55 fictions on Way for sure ha ha ha ha haha

Mahesh Kalaal said...

hahahahhahaha........
:) :) : )

Lakshmi rajan said...

lol ... this is Joke 55f :P

Sat_hi_sh said...

i guessed ur fiction right :)
is this a real incident ;)

Neha said...

you reminded me of the one and only 55er I have written:

THE WIND POWER

The wind touched her soul with the sweet fragrance of flowers around them in the park.

“Oh he is so irresistible in black; and nobody is around us. The time is perfect, so is the weather” she thought.

She leaned forward to kiss him, their lips met, and his arse whistled.

Urvashi said...

haha...gr8 one.. :)

But "a true fictional incident" dint get tht...!!!!

kanagu said...

he he he :)

SG said...

Nice one. Unexcpected ending.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

really unexpectable..:P nice 55 fiction

Shas said...

Lolzz...fartable post ;p

Readers Dais said...

Ha...ha happens

suruchi said...

OH MAI GAWWWWWWWWWWD!
Or then...hey bhagwaan!:-)
Lolssssssss

You Did Whaaat?! said...

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http://youdidwhaaat.blogspot.com/
:)

Ayswarya said...

Not so goood this time :)

Thousif Raza said...

ha ha nice one man :)... and you have a surprise on my blog... come and look into it ok... :))



take car and keep writing........

blunt edges said...

wish sai reads this ;)

shyam said...

he he.. sai anna gonna kill ya ;) ;)

Amity said...

i can't forgive myself...i am always late:)

anyways...you made me smile here and i suddenly recall one of my students in high school when i was teaching way back so long na...:)

they were having exams and i scolded him why he was so restless, i told him to stay put on his chair, then suddenly, he farted sooooooo loud!

got me? of course u didn't laugh!

chitra said...

stopping by to say hello to you.long time..... enjoyed my vacation well.

Shalini said...

jeeeez!!!!!!!
LOL!!! :P