Thursday, December 9, 2010

55 FiCtIoN - PuNcH

I have mastered the art of disappearing very easily. One of the reasons why I disappeared from the blogs ville for some time. My Dad used to take me to the exhibition when I was a kid and I used to hide somewhere .My Dad would go nuts in search of me. This went on for sometime until once, he did the same thing and I got scared to hell.

Because I watch a lot of Kollywood movies this is a masala kind of introduction to show the masses that am Back from rehab and will start to haunt and tickle you all.

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Chance ! This was his only chance

All his hard work , put to test

The punch could change his day

He lunged forward with fear,

His hands sweaty as they got ready to punch heavily

He looked at his target and strained his brain

A mental pressure than a physical one

He Punched the 4 digits on the ATM

"Invalid Pin"

31 comments:

bliss said...

hahah hey HaRy, nice to have you back. will be great to read your posts again!!
invalid pin!! thats nice. i had thought it would go in direction of a shooter but i guess you havent tried that. invalid pin, on the other hand, seems to be your story. it is mine atleast :P
dont disappear again, ok. btw, it must be fun hiding at the exhibitions :D

Sameera said...

Awesome. Nice to read a comic 55 fiction. It is a talent.

Ahem ahem.. taking inspiration from you.. I have started my own attempts at 55fiction. Do take a visit.

Harini said...

haha! Back after a long hiatus. I hope u dont do the disappearing act again :)

Makk said...

I hope you are fine now.

are you?

Bikramjit said...

ANd you return wowowow... How u doing ...

Invalid PIN.. SO what did he do...


Nice one ...

Bikram's

Nithya said...

Good to see you back :)

Liked the intro more than the fiction ;)

Ayswarya said...

Gooood one mate :) why dont you start writing moreeeee

chitra said...

Nice to see you back. Missed your posts. you punched the keys well:)

the couple that cooks said...

hehehhee...smart eh !! i liked the last word "invalid pin"

mine is usually "insufficient balance "

Sourav said...

Spot on Hary! In spite of the long absence there are no signs of rust in your words! :)

vivek said...

Hehe , that what came out flowing in the end ..
Nice one.
When I check for me its shows insufficient funds please choose another lower amount
how low I can go , below 100/-

Nice ..55 tough for to ..as never tried ..na..

Have a great weekend.

shyam said...

bro .. did that happen to you!!?? poor you

Raj said...

lol. good one :P

Amity said...

So you're back now from a long hiatus???

Hmmm...what you did is worth copying huh...let me... :P

May you have a great time ribtickling us once again...:-)

Mabuhay HaRy!!!

Rajlakshmi said...

woaaa look who's back... and that too with a punch :D
loved the punch oops the story :P

kanaguonline said...

Welcome back machi.. :)
thats a nice one :) :)

Anita :) said...

:D Invalid Pin was cool, but I think your Dad is cooler ! Had a gr8 laugh !

HaRy!! said...

~Bliss... hey smitz.... nice to c yu around... well thats always the twist in 55'ers... and hey am not able to post comments on yur blog? wha happ?

~Sameera... talent? whoa yu shud start taking that up.. quite easy :) !sure will check it out

HaRy!! said...

~Harini... well no... normally bak to abnormality :)!

~Makk... Thanks Makk.. I am, am I :)! yes indeed

HaRy!! said...

~Bikram.... am alrite mate... well he punched the wrong nos :)! like me

~Nithya... ha ha yeah masala hero!

HaRy!! said...

~Ayswarya... yes moreeeee

~Chitra... punched but terrible reaction!

HaRy!! said...

~the couple... oh thats all our misery story... there is nothin in the a/c either way!

HaRy!! said...

~Sourav... thnkq master!

~Vivek...well try it on mate... not hard, easier to write..insufficient fund our old story always!

HaRy!! said...

~Shyam... rei bro... yur card only lol!

~Raj...cheeeerrrsss

HaRy!! said...

~Rajlakshmi....punch pandi :)!

~Kanagu...thanks machi... epadi irukinga?

HaRy!! said...

~Amity.... wow niceee to hear!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

why you are making me to stand and clap , every time you write a 55ier ?

Sh@s said...

You punched my brains coz I was thinking of fruit punch :P

Sat_hi_sh said...

Welcome back sare :)

Jzt4me said...

The Punch was good...Atleast the result was Invalid Pin...I am more used to..."Not enough cash"...hehe!! thats more heart breaking..hehee!!

karan said...

hey hary....u hav got d talent t make peope laugh....ur writin is overflowin wid wit!....

i v js enterd blogin...do advice me as m completely novice here!!!.. :)