Thursday, September 23, 2010

55 FiCtIOn - DrEaDeD PaCkAgE !

Yet another 55 fiction which denotes am very jobless but quite busy at the same time.
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With great difficulty and, sweating profusely he completed his climb

The burden enormous enough to rip his pant apart!

The arc shaped package in front, haunted him

Fate as it was, He repented for developing it

He tried hiding it in vain..

But this was the reason, he had grabbed attention

His FAT STOMACH!

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For all my plump amigos, nothing wrong in being fat :)! Its why you stand apart... no offence meant though if some one did get annoyed, I would suggest to get angry at the blog author who is blabbering right now.

38 comments:

Pavitra .... said...

Hahaha...nice one!!

Kay said...

I jiggle as I laugh.. :)

chitra said...

Good one....
Was wondering what that heavy package could be.

Harini said...

Hehe... good.

SG said...

Nice one. Liked it.

Insignia said...

Good one :-)

Rajlakshmi said...

hahahaha :D.. .:D
glad to read you after a long time :D so are you to grabbing attention for the same reason :P

karthick said...

cool bro!! am remembering my maths professor for his big arc shaped package in the front!!!!

Amity said...

ha ha ha...there are so many plump people around me this moment including my hubby! Lols!

HaRy!! said...

~Pavitra... he he!

~Kay... jiggles eh!

HaRy!! said...

~Chitra... and yu guessed wat? :P

~Harini... tankq

HaRy!! said...

~SG & Bindu... thnkq thnkq :)

HaRy!! said...

~Rajlakshmi.... no no... am not that kinda attention grabber... some other means though!

~Karthik.... rite rite!all prof and police stories same!

HaRy!! said...

~Amity... lolz all around us!

RGB said...

arc shaped package, huh?! LOL :D

Mahesh Kalaal said...

:) :) :)

Bikramjit Singh Mann said...

you havenot seen my ONE PACK then ...

Madhu said...

whats your weight..tell me that first!

Thousif Raza said...

nice one and ahem nice thinking ;).....



take care and keep writing............

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

i really agree with you :D

Sat_hi_sh said...

he he i guessed the end right this time :D
good work sare !!!

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

You wrote about me... hmmmpf...:P

Shalini said...

Haha!! :P

kanagu said...

ennaya paathu than itha ezhuthuneegalo??? ;)

Nice machi :)

deeps said...

:)
sweet and short.. the story i mean not stomach!! :P

shail said...

Hilarious. Really good. Sorry if it is unasked for adivce, but I feel 'completed his climb'' would be more correct than 'succeeded his climb' and also '..he had grabbed attention'
Please delete the comment if you feel I am transgressing :)

blunt edges said...

Haha...and that proves you're a lean guy ;)

Ayswarya said...

hehe :) looks like ppl shd stop eating like u :)

callezee said...

So now i am also 55 fiction,loved the post..

niyati said...

Long time I've been here.. :)
But anyway, its good to know you're still trying to perfect yourself at 55 fiction.. :D lol
Great work.. keep it up!!

Sh@s said...

Nice one :)

SatyU said...

Hehehe... good one Hary!
How are you? :)

Sangitha :) said...

hahahahaha.. :D

now that was a sarcastic post.. hope it inspires some ppl to lose that fat stomach.. :))

The Blue Periwinkle said...

Hahaha!

I like! :)

SG said...

Last one was one month and one day ago. Miss you.

sm said...

happy diwali

Makk said...

MISSING???

I guess police has arrested you fro a laughing riot...lollzzzz

Anu...:) said...

Nice one :)