Friday, March 5, 2010

55 FiCtIon - DaMn HeR

Hi Amigos, hope everyone remember me... me the cartoonist away from blogs ville for quite a while playing the busy boy(ok ok man) game.... ll be back with my mokai and blade jokes... till then ensoi my 55er :) ... take care.. Happy weekend!

Stealthily he approached her ,Hand was his biggest weapon
She deserved it for she preyed on so many men
She was there every day, sleepless nights because of her
Now his friend?!! He decided to put an end to this
Could see her silhouette in the dark, as she approached his friend
He smashed the "mosquito
"

43 comments:

Mahesh Kalaal said...

a splash in the humour.......did strike well.....nice one :)

Makk said...

nice but could have been better.

:)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

i never that his friend is a mosquito!! very good 55 fiction~!! :D

Neha said...

hmmm..

55er is the best way to update a blog when busy :D

gayathri-vishwanathan said...

ek machar saala ek macha aadmi ko...err never mind.


nice one hary...

Neha said...

lol!...mosquito? :O =))

Insignia said...

Lol!!! Nice.. you could have given much more build up. But in just 55 words, guess its difficult.

Great!!

Nithya said...

Ha ha ha ha ha ha. A nice come back :)

chitz said...

i had a hint it was "her"..:)

chitz said...

i had a hint it was "her"..:)

anupama said...

Dear Hary,
Good Evening!
the suspense is maintained.keep trying.
Hope you are back to the track.
Wishing you a wonderful weekend,
Sasneham,
Anu

chitra said...

Good one Hary. Never thought it would be a mosquito. Enjoyed it.

Shas said...

Ouch....u killer... :D
Killed her with mere 55 words :P

Meow said...

that is way too hilarious Hary.. epdi ipdi la :P nalla iruku :)

Anu...:) said...

Paavam kosu :(
:P

Anya said...

Hey....
nice to see you back :-)
And HAPPY weekend to you HaRy ...

vidya said...

Good one:)

Peneloppe said...

aiyo pavam mosquitoes :(

Madhu said...

hi..long time..where the hell where u?/ ponnu sight adikkaa poirundiya?? :P :D

paavam da mosquito..:) Sema kolai aache idhu.Ill file a case!

chitra said...

Bells are ringing... Is it true Hary?. Let me know. I would be there.:)

Harini said...

hmmm... mosquito was her :P.

lakshmi said...

that is a nice one HaRy

lakshmi said...

that is a nice one HaRy

Raj said...

:P

busy man? why?

what happened to the ever funny boy?

TheBeez said...

Long time, eh? Glad to know you're still creating funnies and whatnot! :)

Rochana Chaturvedi said...

Hey Hary,
I find your 55 fiction a great concept and all the posts are witty and very well written...this one's another feather in the cap, good job!

kanagu said...

supense hand is biggest weapon nu sonna podhe therinjiduchu machi :( :(

Rajlakshmi said...

hahahha lolzzz :D poor mosquito :P

blunt edges said...

a gory tale i must say...u should have given a note up ahead: "blood n violence may follow" ;)

Sat_hi_sh said...

Build lan balama irundhadhu Sir :)
Nice fiction btw...

expecting ur comic posts soon..

keep blogging
cheers !!!

Manju said...

kill that bitch haha, i hate mosquitoes, hate hate hate!

Rajlakshmi said...

Award 4 u in my blog :)

vEnKy said...

Female anopheles mosquito ehei ;)

SatyU said...

:O
Mosquito???
Lol

hehehe :P

Takecare :)

Shas said...

Hi! Wherez u hiding? Its long u hav been missing in action...

sm said...

interesting

Sourav C. Pandey said...

55 is good, I mean the words ! :P :P

And this reminds me to switch on my Mortein ! ;)

Sourav .. in love with me and life!! :)

Rishi said...

sala ake machar aamdi ko hijda bana deta hai


A Crooked Smile

sm said...

good one

Sans said...

The speed at which the meter in any auto runs is always faster than the speed of any ceiling fan!

'My name is wala' and i dont have an autorickshaw.i've pushpak that can accommodate any number of ppl...

KParthasarathi said...

Very good

Shalini said...

Good one! :D

Amity said...

I made a comment here HaRy...it's missing!