Friday, November 6, 2009

sHe FiGhTs - 55 FiCtIoN - 2

Hello all, A big Sorry for not being around your blogs lately as it seems even I need to work someday and that daunting day has turned up :( , so ll be back with my blunt jokes and blogs, of course mokai comments meanwhile wrote my second attempt on 55 fiction, not sure if this was the way 55Fiction queen Shruti wud be impressed with (Shruti are yu reading this? )..anyways here it goes.

Oh and thanks for all the suggestions on Halloween costume, as my friend suggested I already looked like a Halloween geek , but anyways dressed up like Jack Sparrow, but in the end it looked like Crap Sparrow!


Note : 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 55 words.



"She Knew she was strong, she had to fight ,her mouth being her biggest weapon!


As the guy in white came with the deadly sharp monster, she braced and clenched her hands.

She opened her mouth and got ready, suddenly he stuck the sharpness inside her mouth, then he removed her decayed tooth."


Happy Weekend fellas!

56 comments:

Nazish Rahman said...

Nice Harry.....
seems 55 Fiction is the 'in" thing as far as blogging world is concerned...

Rajlakshmi said...

crap sparrow!!!! LOLZZZZZZZZZZ :D

now that was a painful story :P ouch!!! my tooth is aching now ... hehehe... wonderfully narrated :)

chocolate lover said...

hey nice one hary..
you are really good in fiction too
byeeeeeee
take care :)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

Hi buddy

I think she should use pepsodent...
what do u say ??

Sat_hi_sh said...

Hey kewl fiction sir :)
Loved it...
U surely entertain ur blog readers :)


keep blogging
cheers!!!

AS said...

hahahaha! I can relate to this, i have an appointment with the dentist tomm.

ahahaha!

A S said...

hii

I can relate to this, i have an appointment with the dentist tommorrow!!

:)

bliss said...

u r getting better!! it was. it was short!!, finished even before i knew it!! ;) :P

Rajalakshmi Umapathy said...
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RSV said...

hey How could u think i wud leave a 55F?
It was great. Luckily though, I have never had a toothache..

Nithya said...

Funny one.. have experienced it too ;)

Ha ha ha.. Crap Sparrow!!! that should have been interesting.

should we wait for Mr universe contest to see the Crap Sparrow pic ;)

Neha said...

nice nice...reminded me of ur tooth fairy post..:D

Manju said...

that's for eating too many sweets lmao!
oh harry well you didn't ask me and there's still next halloween anyway ;)
Still, Jack sparrow is also awesome xD

Meow said...

Dear Crap Sparrow,

narrated verrrrrrrry well :)

Amity Me said...

oh that dentist she was not able to defeat and use her mouth which is her biggest weapon, ha ha ha:)

you have the humor...keep up HaRy!

good morning...:)

Suresh Kumar said...

Well... really funny.... first i thought she was preparing to meet death...Like ogden nash said, 'some pains are physical, some pains are mental, there are some which are both which are called dental'

evanescentthoughts said...

hahahaha..too funny :) lol

Ekam said...

Hehe... that was funny :D
55 fiction queen would be proud of you:D

Madhu said...

lol..this was fun!! %% fiction seems too cool..lookin forward to more..crap saproow eh?? upload the pics macha...paathha teriyum!

Shankar said...

that was a funny one.. i thought it was some kind of monster vs alien story... ha..ha...

Rajalakshmi Umapathy said...

@ hary: I meant Pallu doctor.. Sorry lol

Rajalakshmi Umapathy said...

oi... pallu doctor ku ivulo build up ah..?? Enna Koduma Saravanan Idhu..


Just kidding.. Nalla think panra. Maintain pannu pa

Archana said...

Aahhh I hate the dentist! Lol anyway, good one. :)

Being Pramoda... said...

haha..>:) .. nice one ..>:) ...

so u r back..:) good..

Diwakar Sinha said...

:) dentists, huh? good one.
happy weekend to you too..

Miss Always Carried Away said...

hahaha so funny!!! her mouth being her biggest weapon!

Ayswarya said...

hehehehehe... funny hari :)

Yellow Tulip said...

there is somethin for u:)..do collect it dear

Novice Writer said...

First I thought it was going to be the-end-of-the-world and super-hero type story with mouth-as-her-greatest-weapon :-p!
Good one!

Rohit said...

hehee..good twist at the end..went through most of the posts in the first page..nice blog here.

blunt edges said...

neat! maybe the next 55 fiction could be the dentist's take on the incident ;)

Shruti said...

Yes, you had hit the bulls eye! This is the way i wanted your 55Fiction to be!!

Crap sparrow?! :P Photos please :):D

P.S : These days u aren't replying to comments... Why?!

gayathri-vishwanathan said...

hi crap sparrow...why did u remind me of those devils called Dentists...i hate them from the bottom of my heart :(

about ur post: AWESOME...i tried this 55 fiction...it ended up as a 555 fiction

Praseela Nair said...

Ivlo build up ah oru pallu remove panna...Good one though..You have mastered the art of 55 mokkai sorry fiction

Suree said...

55 fiction is good..

keep posting more 55fs....

kanagu said...

Nice one machi... :) liked it :)

TheBeez said...

This is my first time hearing of 55 Fiction, and I LOVE IT!!! You always make me laugh. :)

chitra said...

You are doing well with 55.could maintain the suspense till the end,by the way entertainment in 55 words. Great yaar!

Srishti said...

Hahahahaha!!
Sooooo cool. :))
I'll let my dentist know about this. ;)

cool drizzle said...

Hey that was really cool...
dint knoe the begining and ending but it conveyed ...

numerounity said...

Kewl hary...kewl fiction...un kewl hibernation...MOreover you shouldn't miss my blog...it is such a contrast to 55 word fiction..hee hee

I should also give it a try...what say hary? :)

http://ektakhetan.blogspot.com

Shas said...

Hi! Hi!...a toothless one.
Good attempt. =)

Vishnu said...

lol.. andha pazha pona dentista vida mateenga polarku..

Manju said...

a tattoo...me? heck no, my household is REALLY conservative, my parents would have a fit hahaha

Anya said...

Fantastic blog you have
(@^.^@)

JD said...

:-) good one.

Shalini said...

Hi! Sorry for being the latecomer...
Anyways, better late than never right?
LOL...that was a real funny story and lol on the crap sparrow thingy too..:P

HaRy!! said...

Hey Everyone thanks for your valuable comments!! see you around as well :D .....

HaRy!! said...

and yeah..me little busy lately..sry abt that Shruti! :(

Guria said...

Mouth was her biggest weapon?!! ROFL....
I thought you were talking about a quarrelsome woman!! Or a vampire?? :D
Good one!!
And if I get it right... Mr. Crap Sparrow, you are trying to impress the 55F Queen?? :D :D :P
Oh yes, a good 55-er!! :)

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vidya said...

Enjoyed reading this post..funny and crisp with suspense.
and crap-sparrow huh? Nice mokai stuff:)

Cute Cadre said...

Nice one hary :)

vEnKy said...

I didnt know what hit me nicely camoflouged

Yemiledu said...

HA HA HA
This was super nice :)

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