Tuesday, August 24, 2010

ThE sTrOkE

Before you all proceed with reading the post, my deepest condolence to Leo who has always been around me, all the time, in different forms , right from my childhood. Its a pity you have left me
LeO - click here

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Came the defining moment

Through his Life, this particular second could change things

So quick it came, before he realized what he had to do

"The Stroke" ...! and then he held his chest immediately

He was full of sweat, maybe dehydrated

It was over in a flash

The batsman played the stroke of last ball .
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Leo was my pet mosquito who I trained personally , for biting my friends until I shook hands with Leo once and that was the end.

35 comments:

Bikramjit said...

he he he Trust you to make the STROKE look like that ...

a good one had me STUMPED when i started reading...

Thousif Raza said...

i'm so sorry to hear abt leo... but anyways hope you'll find a new life partnes soon :P

cool 55

take care and keep writing...........

AS said...

haww! leo is no more!... :'(

may his soul rest in peace!!
now train a house lizard!
vey nice post... keep writing

:D

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

awww
pooor leo!!

Insignia said...

My condolences for your Leo.

I liked the stroke. Never anticipated. Nice one :-)

One free advice. Dont use SMS lingo while writing. It doesnt look nice buddy!

chitra said...

Clicked to see Leo ,drew a blank. Kept the suspense till the end.:)

Shalini said...

Weirdo!

SG said...

My condolences for Leo.

Did you give him a navy burial? That is flush down the toilet the mortal remains.

Mahesh Kalaal said...

May i have some tips in how to write a perfect humorous 55ier with such a flair?

If possible, plz raise ur bat once....am cheering and whistling for you from the stands....It do gives me immense pleasure to be a cheer leader for you

PS : It is in "I recommend " category

Nithya said...

awwww sorry for leo. RIP

stroke was good. :)

Sat_hi_sh said...

Vasool Raja MBBS carrom board scene nyabagam varudhu sare :D

well written
cheers !!!

Ayswarya said...

poya mokkai

Sameera said...

Stumped! ;)

Madhu said...

55 fictioan again! Super da!!

Poor leo! Unna nalla kadichirukkanam...then it would have had a soulful death!

HaRy!! said...

~Bikram.....stumped is the word :D

~Thousif... life partner!!! OMG!

HaRy!! said...

~AS...RIP RIP ...!

~Choco.... :(!

HaRy!! said...

~Bindu...Neenga sona advice eduthu change paniten... thank yu :D!

~Chitra....hehehehe!

HaRy!! said...

~Shalini...weirdooo!

~SG.. navy burial, bin burial...!!

HaRy!! said...

~Mahesh...common now...am not as good as yu are bro :)!! but am really moved by yur comment mate!!! thanks a ton!!! I recommend category..wow :)

~Nithya...thnks nithya

HaRy!! said...

~Sathish...hahahahaha amam!

~Ayswarya..u2!!only u

~Sameera...:)

Sourav said...

You 'strike' better then most of the Indian players with your words! ;)

And thank god I never met Leo! :P

Neha said...

naice naice :)

kanagu said...

RIP Leo :( :(

hope u get a good mosquito again :D :D

that one nice 55-er machi :D :D

Gayathri said...

Deepest condolences for Leo :P

Rajlakshmi said...

hehehe so that is Leo...
nice 55'er... wasnt expecting the ending. brilliant.

Raj said...

lEO?
you gave a fly a name. how sweet :P
and if u named a fly after a lion i wonder what you d name your kids.

anyways that was funny :P

pallavi said...

LOL! What a shot, HaRy!!! Very unexpected.

@Bikram: Good pun there ;-)

HaRy!! said...

~Sourav...well which IPL team can i play for!

~Neha.. naice indeeed :)

HaRy!! said...

~Kanagu... pudichi kodu machi!!

~G3...pls attend its funeral without fail

HaRy!! said...

~Rajlakshmi... koool thanks! :)

~Raj...well when ppl give a name to their car,bike..then y not to a living being :).. as for kids... well secret!

HaRy!! said...

~Pallavi.. hey nice to c yu here.. me from soton :)!

KParthasarathi said...

enjoyed reading this.Vaera enna solradhunnu teriyalai

Baljinder Singh said...

Accept my condolences for Leo.....
nice post...

rohini said...

wat to shoot man..u already shot us..with ur post..:)

niyati said...

Superb stroke... :)

-niyati... ;)